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Ludwig fell to the muddy ground, clutching his side. He lay there, vision beginning to blur around the edges. He felt something warm and wet seep through his fingers and saw something walking towards him.

He must have been seeing things…. It was a woman.

"Scheiße…" he whispered before his eyes rolled back in his head and he blacked out.


Ludwig awoke in a plain room, furnished only by his small bed and a little bedside table with a vase of wilted flowers sat upon it. He heard the sound of footsteps ringing on the hard stone floor and called out in German.

"Hier! Ich brauche etwas!"

A head poked around the corner, cold (e/c) eyes boring into him. "Yes?" The woman asked in harsh English.

"Wo bin ich?"

She sighed, "I don't speak German. If you need someone you does, I can get Dr. Heisen but that will take a minute. Now, I ask again: Yes?"

Ludwig narrowed his eyes, trying to recall his English lessons from back at the Academy. "Vhere…. Vhere am I?" he finally asked in halting, thickly accented English.

"You're in London, England."

"E-England?!" Ludwig sat up immediately, scrambling to get out of the bed.

The woman rushed over to his side, forcing him back down onto the mattress, "You can't leave yet! You almost died out there on the battlefield… If that bullet had hit anything vital you would be dead right now. As things are you just have a bit of blood loss. You need to stay in bed while you recover."

"But… They'll kill… me." Ludwig protested eyes wide with distress.

"Not in this facility. It is for all troops. You're safe if you stay… But if you leave- Not so much." The woman pulled the blankets back up to Ludwig's chin, "Now get some more sleep." She turned, the heels on her shiny black shoes making a clicking sound as she walked towards the door.

"Vait, Fräulein!" Ludwig called.

"Yes?" The woman turned, eyebrow raised questioningly.

"Vhat is your name?"

"______," she said softly, "______ ________."

"Das ist schön…"

______ nodded and ducked out of the door.

Ludwig smiled, eyes fluttering closed, "______..." he whispered a final time, savoring the word.


Over the next couple weeks as Ludwig was recuperating, ______ checked on him every day. She would sit on the side of his bed in her crisp white dress, chatting with him as if they were friends not simply caretaker and patient. It was Ludwig's favorite time of the day, the only time he felt truly alive and not just some useless hunk of meat trapped in bed.

"Ludwig, take off your shirt," _____ commanded, "I need to replace the bandages."

"Ja, Fräulein." Ludwig grinned; taking off the scratchy, plain shirt the hospital had given him to reveal a swathe of white bandages wrapped around his torso.

______ began to unwrap them delicately, "Tell me if it hurts." She instructed for what seemed like the thousandth.

"Ja, I know… Und don't move, right?"

"Right." She smiled at him, (e/c) eyes twinkling. _____ finished unwrapping the bindings,

"Wow, Ludwig… This is really healing up. You'll be able to go home soon."

"Home…" The word left a bitter taste in Ludwig's mouth. "Home" was Germany… So far away from this hospital and so far from ______.... "Are you sure I have to go?" He looked up into _____'s sparkling (e/c) eyes, taking her hand and squeezing it gently.

"Yes… It's the rules. You'll be sent back to Germany no matter what I do or say."
Ludwig clenched his hand into a fist, squeezing ______'s tightly. "No…. It doesn't have to be like this."

"W-What are you say-"
Ludwig cut the nurse off with a rough kiss on her lips, "I vill find a vay out of here." He said assuredly, "I vill."

"Oh, Ludwig…" _____'s eyes glistened with tears and she leaned in to kiss the soldier again.


That night, Ludwig lay awake, staring at the ceiling. He was unable to fall asleep… Unable to think about anything but ____.

"She kept me alive in here… I can't abandon her." He said aloud, pounding his fist decidedly on the bed. He threw off the blankets, standing shakily and walking to the doorway. He looked out and seeing no one slipped down the dark hallway.

Ludwig took many twists and turns, following large red exit signs until he found a side door. He grinned, pushing it open and taking his first steps outside in months.  The sky was pitch black, moonless and starless- perfect. The soldier strode confidently to the chain link fence encircling the hospital, ignoring the sharp pains of rocks as they dug into his bare soles. He rattled the fence, pulling at it, trying to bend the metal enough to let him slip underneath and out into the world.

He tugged and teased and yanked for long minutes until there was a small gap between the ground and fence. Ludwig dropped to the ground, wiggling under the fence. He winced slightly as the sharp ends of the fence dug into his back but otherwise made no sound. Finally he climbed into a standing position on the other side of the fence. He stood back, breathing heavily. He was free…. FREE for the first time. He could do anything now. And awaiting him was ____....

Ludwig, unable to contain himself, let out a whoop of joy and took off into the night. There was nothing holding him back now…
This is (kind of) a request from :iconanbukiara:.

I know this is probably NOTHING like what you wanted but back in the time period that (I'm pretty sure) you were talking about, women were not allowed in the military. I might write another one fic later that better suits your request but this is it for now... Sorry.

Hetalia: :iconhimaruyaplz:
Fanfic: :me:
You: :iconsexygermany2plz:
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hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Ludwig: *trips over a rock and falls to the ground*
Wingweeper Featured By Owner Edited Oct 3, 2015
-Falls to the ground, trying my best to stifle my laughter-
NightBlueRose Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015
*Dies from worry* Gah! Ludwig you idiot! How do you know where I live?! Or am I really there just waiting for him...

Ludwig: *gets back up only to step on a rake and get face-poled* hng! 
Wingweeper Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015
-Busts up laughing-
-Falls to the ground laughing-
I know I shouldn't be laughing, but I can't help it! Entschuldigung Ludwig!
                         Hetalia Prussia (Laugh) laughing Luhan EXO : Jongin Laughing 
NightBlueRose Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
Poor, poor Daaahhhling Luddy.
Wingweeper Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
I am laughing at his misfortune~
I am so evil...
And I did NOT put those there, I swear!
-Still chuckling-
NightBlueRose Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
-still giggling like mad- oh how I wish I did. 
I'll be laughing with you at his misfortune~
I'm so demonic...
Wingweeper Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015
We are so alike, my friend~ Hehehehe.. >x3
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BlackAngelLight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
AnbuKiara Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist´s great!
Ok actually i was talking about the United Nations, and they have a army too if i´m not wrong... ( link here: [link] )

But for me the best of all are the few germans words
YOU WROTE THEM ALL RIGHT!!! :iconblushplz: i´m soooo happy!!!
and if you want you can write a part 2....just if you want and you have the time and all these things...
thanks ;D
TheAnswer-FortyTwo Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Oh... I knew I was getting something wrong. :iconfacepalmplz: And I used Google Translate for the German words. (It's pretty reliable if you only translate short sentences) And I don't think I'll write a part two but if enough people want me to I might *shrug*
m00nlight101 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I DEMAND A SEQUAL!!! :iconmoarplz::iconnaoplz:
sophiakuso Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Krazygirlz2 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But he doesn't know where I live..... 0-o Will you be continuing this?
ikutolovins58 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
i need :iconmoarplz:
TheAnswer-FortyTwo Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
I'm getting to your request I just have no idea what to do because... It's been in the seventies this winter so I'm not feelin' the snow....
ikutolovins58 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
take your time :D
aSiAnLiKeThAt Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Wounded II :3
hinatahyyuga Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this was awesome
ImtheheroAmerica Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness that was amazng. Please make a second part!! <33
shadamybaby Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Very good
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